Thursday, 30 June 2011

Episode 7 - Doctor Doctor (page 21 - 30)

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21.1 Closeup of Savita sucking on Doctors dick. Slurping sounds.
21.2 View from top. Doctors hands are now on Savitas head guiding her on his dick. Says “Yeah… just like that, your lips and tongue are making my tool so wet.”
21.3 View from doctors eyes. Doctor has pulled his dick out of her mouth so it is now at the tip of Savitas lips. Savita still holding on to it and kissing the tip. Doctor saying “You seem to be an expert in sucking Savitaji” — “The tool is wet enough now ” — (Connect with dialogue of 21.4)
21.4 Doctor again behind savita. He is holding his dick with one hand and other hand is spreading savitas legs near her pussy. Doctor says “Time to put it back in!” (This dialogue has to be connected with last sentence from 21.3)





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22.1 Doctor inserts his dick in Savitas pussy. He’s got a pained sexual expression on his face. Sound of “Ahhhhh”
22.2 Front scene. Savita geting fucked. Savita says “Is everything ok doctor?”
22.3 Doctors saying “Yes Savita, its almost gone completely in!” — “Can you feel it?”
22.4 Closeup shot of savitas pussy with doctors dick in it.
22.5 Savita with a sexual expression on face saying “I can, I can…”



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23.1 Three boxes of Closeup shot of sex . Sexual sounds. ( In the these three boxes, you have to show dick in diff stages of fucking, so we can give the audience the impression of savita actually being fucked)
23.2 View of doctor fucking savita. We can see savitas face. She has a look of false shock on her face. Says “Oh doctor, what are you doing?” — “It seems that you are fucking me!”
23.3 View in different angle of doctor fucking savita. We can see doctors face now. Doctor says “No Savita, this is only the exam” — “Just keep moving your body along with me, just need to push it little more inside!”



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24.1 Far scene of doctors office. Doctor fucking Savita.
24.2 Doctor saying “Just a little more…”
24.3 Savita now looking really horny screaming “OK doctor. Do it, do it!”
24.4 Scene of doctor fucking savita. Doctor thinking “Oh, she’s got as horny as me now. I have to take this chance to get on top of her!”



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25.1 Doctors saying “It’s not enough like this. I think its better if we do it from front”
25.2 Doctor pulling out his dick, his hands on savita thighs.
25.3 Doctor taking off his coat. Says “We better take off our clothes too. I don’t want anything scraping against your body”
25.4 View from Doctors eyes. Savita has turned aound on the table. Her gown is in dissarray, boobs and pussy showing. She says “Ok doctor, whatever you say.”



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26.1 Scene of doctor and savita. We can see she is now completely naked. She is seeing the doctor in front of her. He is also naked. Savita thinking “Oh god, I can’t believe I’m doing this, but his dick feels so great inside my pussy!”
26.2 Scene from Savita’s eyes. We can see doctor is getting on top of her. Doctor saying “Please spread your legs wide. The wider you spread, the deeper it will slide in.”
26.3 Doctor on top of Savita. Savita eyes closed saying “Ahhh”. Closeup of doctors dick entering her pussy.
26.4 View from front. We can see doctor on top of savita. Doctor thinking “Oh, our naked bodies touching each other feel so great!”




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27.1 Doctor with his hand on Savitas boobs looking at them. Says “You’ve got such nice firm boobs Savita”
27.2 View from behind doctor, we can see back of doctor and savitas face. Her eyes are closed and she is looking like she is enjoying the fucking. Says “Thanks doctor”
27.3 Doctor with his mouth towards her nipples. Says ‘Let me see how your nipples react to sucking on them”
27.4 Doctor has his mouth on Savitas nipple sucking it. Savita saying “Oh doctor, don’t stop”



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28.1 Shot from bottom. We can see doctors dick inside savitas pussy. Sex sounds
28.2 Savita saying “Oh doctor, faster!” — “Do it faster, push it deeper”
28.3 Doctor thinking “I’m almost about to cum. Just a few more strokes inside her pussy and…”
28.4 Full lenght shot. Savita now is full ecstasy screaming ‘Please don’t stop doctor” — “Please don’t stop FUCKING me!” — “I’m gonna cum”



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29.1 Scene of doctor fucking savita. Sex sounds.Savita screaming “Oh!! Doctor!”
29.2 Doctor saying “Just keep pushing your pussy against my dick. Both of us will come together.”
29.3 Savita “Oh yes, yes yes!!!” — “Ahhhhh…” Look of satisfaction on her face.
29.4 View of office door. The nurse has just walked in. She has a shocked look on her face. Savita is looking at her shocked too. Nurse saying “Mrs Patel!”



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30.1 Closeup of Nurse. Normal look on her face. She is saying “Mrs Patel?”
30.2 View of office. Savita is sitting in same position as start of the story. (it was all a dream). Savita looking at nurse with a puzzled expression on her face says “Huh?”
30.3 View from behind savita. We can see the nurse from her eyes. Nurse saying “Doctor Shweta is ready for you now”
30.4 Savita with a smile on her face. Savita thinking “Oh what a fantasy!” — ‘I think I’ll have to change my doctor soon and see if I can make it come true!” Caption of “THE END”


Episode 7 - Doctor Doctor (page 11 to 20)


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11.1 Savita with an innocent look on her face pressing her boobs with both hands now. Says “First I cup them from below and genty massage my boobs to see if I can feel anything different”
11.2 Savita now with one of her fingers pressing her nipple, while other hand is still on one of her breasts. She is looking more slutty now. Says “Then I take my nipples in my fingers and gently squeeze them.”
11.3 Doctor looking at Savita playing with her boobs. She is looking straight at him. Doctor thinking “Man, this is so hot. I have to touch those boobs” — “I just can’t stop myself.”
11.4 Doctor saying “No, no, Mrs Patel. That is all wrong” — “Looks like I’m going to have to show you how to do it right.”

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12.1 Doctor holding savitas hands and pressing her fingers on one of her breasts pressing downwards at the nipple. Saying “Use your fingers and start moving downwards from your nipples, like this” –”Make sure you do this really slowly.”
12.2 View from top. Doctor holding both her hands and places her palms on either side of her nipples of one breast.Saying “Then take both your hands and move them around your breast like this to feel for anything.” Closeup of doctors hardon.
12.3 Doctor saying “Actually, since you have not done it properly from quite some time, I think it’s better I do a complete breast checkup myself.” — “Can you please move the gown a little lower?”
12.4 Savita thinking “Oh, I might as well do it now. Anyways this flimsy gown is hardly covering anything”

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13.1 Savita pulling down one side of the gown so that one of her breasts is exposed. Doctor thinking “Wow, please let this not be a dream god! Please!”
13.2 Savita now lying down with both of her boobs exposed. Savita saying “Ok doctor, go ahead.” Doctor thinking “This is my chance to press her boobs anyhow I wish!”
13.3/4/5 Doctor with his hands all over savitas boobs. Three small boxes showing the doctors hands feeling up Savitas boobs. Savita with her eyes closed looking like she is enjoying it.
13.6 Doctor says “Hmm, everything feels ok here” — “But I did feel some problem with your lower back earlier” – “Have you been doing anything that could affect your posture?”

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14.1 Savita now with eyes open looking little confused. Says “No doctor”. Doctor with a thinking look on his face says “Are you sure?” — “Hmm… what about sex?”
14.2 Doctor now with michevious look on his face asking “Have you tried any .. hmmm, non conventional positions lately?” His hand is on her knee.
14.3 Savita with a shocked look on her face. Thinking “Oh my god! What is he asking me!!” Doctors hand is now on her thigh.
14.4 View from doctors eyes of top half of savitas body. Savita saying “Actually doctor, sometime back I was in an awkward position…” — “Where both my holes were filled.” Thought bubble of savita getting fucked by the cricket boys.

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15.1 Doctor with a shocked look on his face. Closeup of his hardon. Thinking “Wow, I don’t believe it. I’ve got my hands on a real horny housewife” – “And today I didn’t get traffic also while coming to work” — “This has to be my lucky day.”
15.2 Doctor now turning Savita around. She is facing him while lying on her side and his hand is on her ass. Doctor saying “Oh! Hmmm… That could be the reason. I better check closely, turn around again please.”
15.3 Scene from top and front of savita. Doctor pulls off her panties to just below her thighs. Savita with a shocked look on her face.
15.4 Savita looking shocked says “What are you doing doctor, why did you just pull off my panties?”

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16.1 Close scene of doctor pulling off Savitas panties. Inset of Closeup of Savitas shocked face. (This should be a small box)
16.2 Doctor with a lustful look on his face “Don’t worry Mrs. Patel, its part of the exam” — “I need to see inside your pussy to make sure there are no problems there.” (Also a small box)
16.3 Savitas panties are now off completely and just around one of her feet. Doctor has his hands in between her legs spreading them. Says “Please spread your legs wide apart, so I can get a good look.”
16.4 View from doctor’s eyes of savitas spread legs and wet pussy. Doctor saying “So you said both your holes were filled” — “Does that mean you got fucked in your ASS and your PUSSY?”

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17.1 View of savita lying down. We can see her face. She has a resigned look on her face. Thinking “Oh god, why did I have to blurt that out!!” — “I’m such an idiot”. Says “Yes Doctor”
17.2 Doctor saying “Oh, so do you normally fuck two guys at a time?”. Savita replies “No doctor, its just happened once by accident.”
17.3 Doctor now with his fingers just at the tip of her pussy. Says “I’m putting my fingers inside your pussy now, to check it”
17.4 Savita with her eyes closed saying “Oh doctor!!” Inset closeup of doctors fingers deeper inside her pussy.

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18.1 Top view. We can see doctors hands spreading savitas pussy. And we can see doctors hardon sticking out. Doctor says “I need to do a deeper examination, where my fingers can’t reach” — “Unfortunately, I don’t have the proper equipment right now, so we’ll have to do it the natural way.”
18.2 Shocked look on Savitas face. She is thinking “Natural way????” In the background doctor is looking down and pulling down his pant zip. Zipper sound.
18.3 Savita says “What are doing doctor?”
18.4 Doctor now with his dick outside in his hand replies “Nothing Mrs. Patel, just getting the equipment ready. You’ll find something hard press against your pussy now.”

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19.1 Top view. Doctor pushing his dick just inside Savita’s pussy. Sound from savita “Doctor.. Ahhh!”
19.2 Closeup view. Doctors dick inside savitas pussy. Savita saying “Oh Doctor, I can feel something entering in my pussy. What is it??”
19.3 Different view of doctor fucking savita where we can see her face. She has a pained but still enjoying expression on her face. Savita says “My pussy is not wet enough, its too dry” — “It hurts!”
19.4 Doctor with his hands on Savitas ass, pulling his dick out. Its now at the tip of her pussy, just outside it. Doctor saying “Hmmm, looks like I will need to lubricate my tool” – “It will be more hygenic if your own juices are used for that Mrs. Patel. You’re going to have to take in your mouth and lick it good.”

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20.1 Doctor goes in front of Savita now with his rock hard dick right in front of her face. His dick is still wet from her pussy. He is looking at her with a cunning smile. Savita is staring at his dick with wide eyes completly shocked. Doctor says “Till you make it wet with your tongue, let me try and get your pussy lubricated naturally”
20.2 Closeup of Savitas face looking shocked with the dick right in front of her. She is thinking “Oh god, what have I got myself into this time!” — ” I should get out of here right now.”
20.3 Doctor with his fingers in her pussy. Savita’s hand going towards the doctors dick, he mouth opening up. She is thinking “But he’s already put his dick in my pussy, already FUCKED ME!” –”And he knows I’ve been fucked by the two building boys. I might as well go along with whatever he says!”
20.4 Savita closes eyes and takes his dick in her mouth. A very simple look on her face. Doctor too eyes closed and you can see satisfaction on his face. Sound from doctor “Ahhhhhh”


Episode 7 - Doctor Doctor (page 6 to 10)


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6.1 Scene of savitas face and boobs in same position as 5.4. Savita with a worried look on her face thinking “Oh no, this almost feels like he’s pressing my boobs” — “I should have kept my bra on.”
6.2 Savita thinking “My normal doctor never presses against them so hard during this exam. I hope this is ok.”
6.3 View of Savitas boobs from doctors eyes. His hands and stetescope have moved to other other breast now. Doctor thinking “Wow, I can actually feel her breasts pressing slightly against the palm of my hand”
6.4 Doctor thinking “Time to try something else now.” Doctor says “Ok, seems fine. Can you please turn over so I can check your back now.”


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7.1 View from doctors eyes. Savita has turned around halfway so that her ass is projecting towards the doctor.
7.2 Savita now lying down face downwards on the table. Doctor looking at her ass and thinking. “Oh, I wish I could just rub my dick against that ass” –”It looks so hot!”
7.3 Doctor with a cunning look on his face “Mrs. Patel, I’m going to have to move your gown a little higher now” –” I need to check your lower back.”
7.4 Savita thinking “He wants to move my gown up. That will show my panties to everyone!”

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8.1 Far view. Doctor saying to Savita “Ok, I’m moving your gown up now”. Savita thinking “Well, he is a doctor, it must be normal.”
8.2 Doctors hands have moved Savitas gown higher up to almost her waist. We can see her panties. Doctor thinking “Wow, look at her tight ass!” — “I could just push in my dick inside that tight little hole of hers.”
8.3 Doctors hands checking her lower back. Doctor saying “Mrs. Patel, I will be pressing against your back now.”. Closeup of doctor getting a hardon. Doctor is thinking “Man, just touching her soft body has given me a hardon.”

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9.1 Close view of doctors hands on Savita’s lower back but his fingers are a little bit inside her panties.
9.2 Savita with a shocked look on her face thinking “Does he have his fingers inside my panties?”
9.3 View of Doctor with his hands in same position. Thinking “Man, I better control myself before I go too far!”
9.4 Small box of Doctor with a normal look on his face saying “Please turn around now.”
9.5 Small box of Doctor with a now smiling and cunning look on his face saying “By the way, are you doing your regular breast examinations?”

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10.1 View of Savita’s face and boobs. She is looking confused. Says “Uh.. yes doctor. I do it sometimes”
10.2 Doctor looking at Savita. Says “It is very important for you to do it.” — “can you show me how you perform the test so I can make sure you do it the right way”
10.3 Savita with one hand carelessly on her breast almost covering it in a way. She is thinking “Oh god, this is so embarrasing” — “But in a way its actually turning me on.”
10.4 Savia saying “Ok doctor”. She has now a more slutty look on her face and her hand is now pressing her breast.

Episode 7 - Doctor Doctor (page 1 to 5)


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1.1 Savita entering a doctors clinic. You need to draw it in such a way that we know it is a doctors clinic. She is dressed in a Salwar Kameez(See SB4.1 for salwar description)
1.2 Savita inside doctors office. A receptionist is sitting down at a desk. Receptionist says “Hello Mrs. Patel, how are you?” — “Just sit down for a few minutes. Dr Shweta will be with you for your full body checkup right away.”
1.3 Savita sitting down. She sees a good looking male doctor* passing by. herself “I just hate this yearly body checkup. And that Shweta always makes me wait.” — “Hmm, I’d rather have my exam done by this guy. I wonder how it would be getting a examination done by a hot male doctor!”

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2.1 Savita now shown inside the doctors office. There is a exam table(bed) at one side. Doctor is sitting down. Savita says “Hi Doctor, time for my annual checkup.” Doctor replies “Yes Mrs. Patel, please sit down.” — “How have you been, how is Ashok?”
2.2 Savita says “Oh, he has been busy. His job always keeps him away.” –”And I’m left alone, you know how it is!”
2.3 Doctor “Is that back pain you had a few months back still affecting you?”. Savita replies “No, doctor. I’ve been getting regualar massages for that, so its good”. A thought bubble showing a naked savita with manoj on top of her.”
2.4 Doctor stands up and points to a curtained area. Says “Ok, why don’t you go behind that curtain and change into the hospital gown. We’ll begin your checkup then.”

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3.1 Savita is inside the curatined area. She is pulling off the Salwar (top part) over her head. We can see her wearing a bra.
3.2 View from outside. Doctor can see Savita from the side of the curtain because she has not pulled it all the way closed. Savita is facing sideways so she cannot see the doctor. Doctor thinking “Damn, I love it when my patients don’t close the curtain properly.” — “I’ve been dying to get a glimpse of her naked body from the moment she walked in the door.”
3.3 View from doctors eyes itself. We can see Savita now just in bra and panties. She is putting her pants on a hook. Doctor thinking “Wow, her boobs are great, I wonder how they will taste in my mouth.” –”How I would love to suck on her nipples!”
3.4 Front view of Savita now inside the curtain area. She is completely naked except for panties. Putting on the hospital smock, its just above her head.

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4.1 View of Savita with the hospital gown on. The gown is too tight for her and we can see the outline of her nipples. Savita is thinking “This gown is so tight.” — “My boobs are almost bursting out of it and its hardly covering my ass!”
4.2 View from behind doctor. Savita inside the curtained area, but she has moved the curtain away with one hand and looking at the doctor. Her hand is till up on the curtain rod. Savita says “Doctor, isn’t this gown a little too tight for me?”
4.3 Doctor pointing to an exam table and saying “I’m sorry Mrs. Patel, this is the only one I have right now.” — “Why don’t you get on the exam table so we can begin”
4.4 Savita facing towards the exam table and getting up on it with her back to the doctor. Doctor thinking “I wish I could get up on that table with her” — “Just pressing against that hot body would make me cum!”

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5.1 Top view of Savita lying down on the exam table with her mouth open. Doctor is near her face with his fingers on her lips. Doctor saying “Open your mouth wide and stick your tongue out please.”
5.2 Doctor thinking ” Oh man, I can feel the wetness of her tongue on my fingers. I can’t bear to imagine how it would feel on my dick.”
5.3 Doctor now taking the stetescope and putting it just above Savitas breasts. Doctor thinking “This is my chance, I’m going to try and press against these beautiful breasts” – “Lets see if she says anything”
5.4 Close up of Savitas boobs with the doctors stescope now directly on them very close to a nipple and pressing against the boobs.

Episode 1 - Bra Salesman (page 11 to 15)

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1. Savita looking at herself in the mirror and saying “Savita dear, you really know how to tease these guys”
2. Bhabhi thinking “But I know what will really excite him”
3. Bhabhi pulling down her clothes and thinking “Mmmmmm”


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1. Savita with her hands inside her panties thinking “Oh god, I am so wet already”
2. Savita now fingering her pussy saying “Ahh Yessss”
3. Savita with one hand in her mouth thinking “I need something bigger than this”



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1. Savita with the bra in her hand thinking “And I know exactly how to get that”
2. Savita Bhabhi putting her bra back on
3. Savita Bhabhi now peeking out of the bedroom and saying “Suno, can you help me with something please”



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1. Salesman with a big smile on his face thinking “Thank you, thank you god!”
2. Salesman acting cool and asking savita bhabhi “Any problem Madam?”
3. Savita bhabhi looking at him and saying “The hook is stuck, it is so tight”



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1. Closeup of the salesman ogling face and Bhabhi’s back with bra still on.
2. Back shot of bhabhi saying ” Please hurry up ji,its hurting my…”
3. Salesman opening the clips of the bra strap.

Episode 1 - Bra Salesman (page 6 to 10)

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1. She is removing the top part of the saree and looking at her boobs. Thinking = ( I’m sure they will not fit)
2. She removes her blouse and notices no bra. Thinking = ( hey bhagwan, i didn’t even wear a bra today, no wonder that harami salesman was thirsty)
3. She is now completely nude in top half and looking at boobs. Thinking = (They have grown so much after marriage)


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1. Bhabhi is holding up bra just below her boobs comparing bra and boobs. Thinking =( it will DEFINETLY not fit)
2. Bhabhi notices salesman in the mirror watching her thru the slightly open bedroom door.
3. Small narration box on top saying [At the same time..]
Back of the Salesman looking at her in the mirror through the slightly open door. thinking = (WOW!!)



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1. Bhabhi still holding the bra below her boobs. Thinking = (Oh no.what do i do?)
2. Bhabhi is covering boobs with bra now. Thinking = (Should I slam the door or just pretend i can’t see him.)
3. Bhabhi now has a naughty look on her face. Boobs are exposed with the bra in her hand besides her hanging by her side. Thinking = (Hmmm maybe I should just let him watch. Its been so long that anyone has anyhow. What harm can it do?)



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1. bhabhi saying “Him watching me has made my nipples so hard”
2. Bhabhi saying “I wish it was his tongue rather than my fingers”
3. bhabhi pressing her boobs and saying “Oh, that would make these even harder”



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1. Bhabhi licking one of her boobs and saying “Ummmm”
2. Bhabhi thinking “Boy look at that harami enjoying the show”
3. Savita Bhabhi with her tongue out
4. Salesman looking at her with a hardon thinking “Damn, what is this woman upto?”

Episode 1 - Bra Salesman (page 1 to 5)

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1. A salesman is ringing on a doorbell of a house. We can see the nameplate – It says Mr. Dharmesh Shah.
2. The door is opened by our heroine in her blue sari with bindi and red bangles.
3. The lustful face of salesman is shown in closeup thinking to himself “man, what a hot bhabhi”


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It will have a full lenght picture of the woman fully dressed with some jewellery.
Two small boxes inserted into the page.
1st box : A wedding photo of her and husband ( image attached) make the husband look like the guy in the photo.
2nd box : Some sort of sex scene just to give an idea to the audience that this is an adult comic.

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1. Salesman says “Hello ma’am, I’m selling this new brand of Bras. Would you be interested?”
2. bhabhi says “No thanks”
3. salesman thinking “How can I get entry to her house”
4. salesman says “Ok ma’am, but please can i get a glass of water”

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1. Bhabhi says “Ok, come in and wait a minute” while walking away ( backside view).In the same box we can also see salesman lookin at her and thinking “Wow, todays my lucky day”
2. Front shot of Bhabhi bending foward and showing cleavage while offering water in tray.
3. Salesman shows a bra box with a picture of a sexy woman in a bra/panty on it saying “Ma’am, please see this – its a special piece.” The picture on the box should be shown clearly.

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1. Bhabhi removes the bra from box and looks at it saying “This is too small, it will never fit”
2. Salesman says “At least try it on Madam. It is special elastic material”
3. Bhabhi walking towards bedroom saying “Ok, wait here for a moment”